Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Concurring with Wordsworth

Daffodils could challenge Daisies as The Girls Next Door of the flower world. They know they're not flashy and that people will never ooh and ahh over them as they do with the Roses and the other more exotic beauties out there-- Daffodils have a perfect star of petals few people even notice, thank you--but they're secure in themselves anyway. Consider them a Litmus test of sorts, perhaps: Is their color "just yellow" or “sunshine on a stem"? They are voluptuous and girly with their curved trumpets and rings of frills, but also sturdy and surprisingly strong: How can such slender and nondescript stalks hold up such spectacular blooms? Quicksilver girls, Daffodils' moods change with each flutter of the wind, sometimes shy and reserved, with trumpets bowed and bobbing toward the ground, other times standing tall and in!-your!-face! with their gold stars looking at you head-on, and then wallflowers again, huddled up against each other as if deep in conversation and only half-hoping you're not paying them too much attention. And the scent! Like my favorite “perfume,” Just-Stepped-Out-of-the-Shower-Clean, Daffodils smell indescribably good. Like springtime. Or soil. Fresh air and fresh starts. They simply make me happy.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well put, m'dear. A lovely tribute to a beautiful flower.

racheld said...

Good Morning, Fabulous VAL!!

Somehow your patchwork screen was still on the computer when I returned just now from "Catching the Bus" with my 12-year-old GRAND. She's with us for a day or two, and getting her to her driveway 20 miles away at 6:30 a.m. for her schoolbus to take her to BAND is somewhat of a feat amongst us of the house. Today was a delay for a FOG that Stephen King could have conjured, and even our two-hours-late still sent us out into the draggy gray mist which encompassed every mile betwixt here and there. She was a bit antsy between our lively discussion of our current Harry Potter read-along, checking the time and plausing out what would we do if . . . concerning the bus. A patch of roadwork (see what I did there?), a lumbering, stopping truck belonging thereto, and a TRAIN conspired to make us so tardy that with nails gritted and teeth clenched tight, we passed block after block of her subdivision, throwing out maybes and what-ifs as we saw little groups of kids vaguely outlined in front of houses, until we saw the flickers of the BUS ahead. It was at HER DRIVEWAY Hallelujah, and all the neighbors were boarding as we drove up, with me quite ready to wave my pink T-shirt like a beacon through the fog. Got the sillies, I think. Just wanted to say I loved this piece---I'm reflective today, and took your presence so easy to hand as a portent to catch up on the folks I'm so fond of, reader-wise and Friendship-hoped. You're a force beyond Nature, Kiddo---your words simply sing off and on the page---like Uncle Pen's fiddle---"You could Hyer it tawk, you could hyer it sang." And a bright sunny mornin' to YOU, Sweet Girl. rrrrrr

Val said...

Rachel, Rachel, Rachel. Thank you. :) "You could Hyer it tawk, you could hyer it sang." :)